Task: Rewrite the story of 'The Kiss That Missed' independently.
Written in test conditions.
Once there was a prince and the king was in a hury, and the king kiss him good night said the king. It "missed the prince told the Queen the Queen told the King, and the Queen said to the night. Then the house galapt away. Then the night sor a big wood and it was scary it was nary it was.......... snowing Wolvs were dribly. Ows are swoopy. Once the kiss kiss the animals wolvs stop beeing drably. bears stop beeying growly!. Ows stop beeping swooy and the night sat on a rock but it wisent a rock it is a dragen! and the kiss went in the dragens nose and it sneset! and the kiss went out and the knight was trighying to run but the dragon said I want to kiss you good night said the dragon. and they walkt back to the castle the Queen or king read a story to the prince and went the king or Queen the king or Queen fel asleep
Jordan has made a great effort to try use description and interesting punctuation.
Next steps: Read your work to check it makes sense.
Keep practising using speech marks so that you can start to use them in the right place.
Here is a punctuation game for you to play.
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